Paste a cold email. Get the autopsy — and one honest rewrite.
Deterministic checks for length, CTA clarity, fluff/hype, fake familiarity, exclamation abuse, and ask size. Rewrites in the Metriclane-honest style: public observation, specific pain, soft CTA — no fake personalization.
- Word count (60–110)
- CTA clarity
- Fluff / hype
- Fake familiarity
- Exclamation abuse
- Ask size
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Autopsy report
Findings
One rewritten version
Placeholders like [Name], [Company], [OBSERVATION] stay on purpose — fill only what you can verify from public sources. No fake “loved your Product Hunt launch.”
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- Paste a cold email (subject optional) — or use the 1-click bad sample.
- Rule scores run in your browser: length, CTA clarity, fluff/hype, fake familiarity, exclamation abuse, ask size.
- Findings list what’s weak and why, with plain-language notes.
- One rewrite in a Metriclane-honest style (public observation, specific pain, soft CTA).
Deterministic rules only — no AI API, no accounts, no data leaves this page.